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PostSubject: meicoomon sanpai   Sat Oct 15, 2016 3:25 pm

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so i finally got to finish meicoomon hope you like it and hope you approve Smile





srry if its not super detailed iam still new to techne study


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PostSubject: Re: meicoomon sanpai   Sat Oct 15, 2016 6:16 pm

Before i start saying my opinion i'd like to say that i don't discourage you from modeling but here we go...

The head is too small or its the body thats too big, meicoomons heads width is as wide as its body which is not whats shown in this model. By looking at the model I'm guessing you started with the feet and then built it uo like a tower, yes? Well thats not a recommended strategy, don't get me wrong the model is really good for a beginner and i made all the mistakes you've done right now but theres some things on the model that can be fixed easily, first of is the portions which i mentioned earlier, as moving all the blocks on the body is quite a lot work id recommend making the head bigger but if you truly want it better id make both the head and body in different sizes for perfection. I also feel like the lines on the body could be improved as the other lines on the body and the face of the model is quite complex.

Also for your next model (If you're ever gonna do one) try to make a digimon you "dislike" making digamous you love for the first ones you make just makes its easier for mistakes and making one you don't like is a really good exercise for beginners. Other than that I think this is a really good model for your first one.

If you want to know how i developed you can always check my first model... It was much worse than this XD and just so you know you're doing much more than any other players by just posting a model in the first place so thats great!
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PostSubject: Re: meicoomon sanpai   Sun Oct 16, 2016 3:08 am

hi duskchan thank you for responding Very Happy i like me some criticism Smile
so i went in and fixed the parts to what you suggested


so what do you think and is there anything else you think must be changed

as for my next digimon i think i might go with something like a baby digimon maybe remodling motimon

and i did check your models its really great how you developed maybe one day i will get better Very Happy cyclops

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PostSubject: Re: meicoomon sanpai   Sun Oct 16, 2016 5:44 am

It looks much more like Meicoomon now! Good job!

Hopefully Knight will be able to review it and my Frimon model soon but he's probs busy atm so we'll just have to wait and see, for further improvements theres not much more that i think is pretty major except of the ears but other than that i find this model really good for a beginner. Good luck!
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PostSubject: Re: meicoomon sanpai   Sun Oct 16, 2016 5:47 am

I think the ears could be bigger, and the mouth could stick out more. Maybe add a seperate block that sticks out of the face, kind of like this.

See how the mouth is a seperate block that sticks out a little?

It's a pretty good model, though. I like it. :3
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PostSubject: Re: meicoomon sanpai   Sun Oct 16, 2016 6:50 am

thank you guys for your kind words <3
as suggested i added moth part amd made ears bigger
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PostSubject: Re: meicoomon sanpai   Sun Oct 16, 2016 8:12 am

im no proffesional (heck i dont even model) but i think its more then good enough to fit in the mod, good job
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PostSubject: Re: meicoomon sanpai   Sun Oct 16, 2016 8:29 am

thank you I love you
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PostSubject: Re: meicoomon sanpai   Thu Oct 20, 2016 2:38 am

so i finally can post links here the model
https://www.dropbox.com/s/actqj82plcb7d94/Meiccomon.rar?dl=0
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